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Recent Additions to the TBR shelves: First Lines

They’d told Aristeas that the Arimaspians were horrible, but he wasn’t prepared for how horrible they were, and it nearly cost him his life.

This is the first line of Beyond the North Wind by Gillian Bradshaw, which I have never read. I picked it up recently because of this post at By Singing Light. Well, the post and following comments. So. Pretty catchy first sentence, isn’t it?

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I definitely want to dive right in.

Anyway, next:

On a windless summer day in an uncertain year, more than a century after the founding of Cornell, a man who told lies for a living climbed to the top of The Hill to fly a kite.

This is from Fool on the Hill by Matt Ruff, which I borrowed from my brother during a recent visit because I really enjoyed Ruff’s Set This House in Order. I would say that’s definitely a promising beginning.

Here’s one you might recognize:

I stare at my gravestone. Locke Jenkins. They paid too much for it. More than they could afford.

I know, that’s more than one sentence, but hey, they’re very short sentences. What a different feel that gives to the opening of a story! This protagonist sounds, what? Closed in, defensive, bitter. Or maybe that’s just me projecting from the second book to this one, the third. This is Fox Forever by Mary Pearson, as you may have recognized, because I wanted to finish the trilogy after reading The Adoration of Jenna Fox and The Fox Inheritance. I do expect a tolerably happy ending, though I’m not actually familiar with Pearson’s other work, so I can’t be sure.

Okay, another:

Happiness, Luc thought as he stroked his wife’s bare shoulder, was not like chocolate. It didn’t melt if you held it too long in your hands.

I bet you all immediately guessed that this might be that new Laura Florand story, and you would be right: The Shadowed Heart. I read this one this past weekend — actually, I went back to The Chocolate Heart and re-read that first. Honestly, it’s amazing how Florand makes the luminously beautiful amazingly rich Summer Corey into a woman you just weep for. Also, I now have a faint but perceptible urge to write some kind of Persephone / Hades retelling. I wonder if that will ever turn into anything?

Moving on:

Sunset fell early over the wintry moorlands of northern England, and prudent men abandoned the road to the criminal, the desperate, and the mail coaches.

This is from Season for Desire, Theresa Romain’s newest Christmas-themed Regency romance, which just came out a couple months ago. These are fun, light, charming, and just right for the Christmas season. Also, I like the chapter titles: Chapter One: Wherein the Adventure Begins, Much Against the Will of Certain Participants. I’ve always enjoyed that kind of thing — and it establishes the tone right off, doesn’t it? Light, fun, charming.

Here’s one I just have as a sample, so far:

Call me Ishael. Yeah, I know, but in this case it’s really my name. Ishmael Horatio Wang. My parents had an unfortunate sense of humor.

I don’t know — the first line is obviously copied from my puppy’s name, so how can I turn it down? Maybe Ish would like me to read this to him? He would probably wag his tail whenever I said “Ishmael.”

Anyway, I got this sample because of a recommendation I saw around somewhere. Here’s what Goodreads says:

THE GOLDEN AGE OF SAIL HAS RETURNED — IN THE YEAR 2351

When his mother dies in a flitter crash, eighteen-year-old Ishmael Horatio Wang must find a job with the planet company or leave the system–and NerisCo isn’t hiring. With credits running low, and prospects limited, he has just one hope…to enlist for two years with a deep space commercial freighter. Ishmael, who only rarely visited the Neris Orbital, and has never been off-planet alone before, finds himself part of an eclectic crew sailing a deep space leviathan between the stars.

Join the crew of the SC Lois McKendrick, a Manchester built clipper as she sets solar sails in search of profit for her company and a crew each entitled to a share equal to their rating.

Space adventure! Who doesn’t love space adventure? It’s got really good ratings on Goodreads — over four stars with about 300 reviews.

So that’s an even half-dozen of the titles I’ve most recently added to my TBR pile, virtual and physical. They all sound pretty promising!

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11 Comments Recent Additions to the TBR shelves: First Lines

  1. Mary+Beth

    Oh, I’m glad you picked up Beyond the North Wind. It has GRIFFINS! They’re delightful.

    I really need to pick up some Laura Florand. Maybe over Christmas. They sound like the perfect books for a morning on the couch with a blanket and hot chocolate.

  2. Rachel

    Ooh, griffins! Something to look forward to.

    And you definitely should try something by Florand over Christmas. With, yes, a fluffy blanket and some hot chocolate.

  3. Craig

    I haven’t read anything by Mary Pearson, and that first line from Fox Forever sounds exactly the same way to me as it does to you. And it’s a pretty compelling opening — though, not being in the mood for bitter, it’s not making me rush right out.

    You didn’t give the name or author of that last book, though it only took a few moments to have Google tell me it’s Quarter Share by Nathan Lowell. (Six books so far, so more of an investment than I thought.)

  4. Phineas

    I read the first three books of the Solar Clipper and thought they were great. But at the beginning of the fourth I thought there was a noticeable change in tone and I had heard comments that the series doesn’t have a happy ending. So I ended up abandoning it. If you do read the whole series, please post your thoughts!

  5. Estara+Swanberg

    Um, the Ishmael story? I was drawn to that by an enthusiastic review from Ilona Andrews, and because it wasn’t expensive and I read the sample I bought the first four books in one go: … this turned out to be one of my most annoyed experiences and if you should chose to read my spoilery reviews of those four books you’ll know why.

    Just FYI, and the short version: to my mind the most utterly annoying Gary Stu I have ever read – but… YMMV. That said, I never read another positive review of the series by Ilona Andrews. Well, maybe she just doesn’t do reviews for further books?

  6. Rachel

    Phineas, good to know. If the series doesn’t have a happy ending, well, not sure I’ll go on with it to the end even if I really like the first several. I’m definitely glad to have this head’s up, so thanks!

    Estara, yes, I saw your review after I put up that post. I’m pretty likely to try the first book anyway, and hopefully I won’t have your voice in my head saying, SEE? GARY STU all the time. But! Who knows? I haven’t even read the full sample yet. Maybe the author’s comma use will bug me or something and then we will *just never know* about the possible other issues.

  7. Estara+Swanberg

    The first book is definitely the best, which is why I felt I had been had when I read on. ^^ There still are lots of positive reviews for the books out there, so it may just be: NOT FOR ME.

    The reason I warned you is because I agree on so many of your views about the books we both read ^^, but if you only have the first one so far then you’ll make your own decision and won’t rue the money if you like it (and buy more) nor if you didn’t and hadn’t bought the rest.

    … I’m not actually sure this last paragraph made the sense I wanted it to make, but it’s almost midnight over here, so please take that into account ^^;

  8. Rachel

    Estara, I sure hate it when the first book is really good and then the rest seem to slowly slide downhill. But we’ll see.

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