That distant ‘thwip!’ sound you hear —

Is the sound of 29 pp vanishing from my WIP. Thwip!

Actually, a bit of it will be added back in as I hand important lines to someone else in a different scene . . . but fundamentally I have just turned TWO talky chapters into ONE talky chapter, which I think will work better. Can’t have everybody just sit around and discuss things ALL the time. Right? Right!

Then I’m going to have this one thing happen on stage instead of off, and move this other event up to the part of the book that hasn’t been written . . . oh, it is all a nuisance, but I am happier with the structure of the book already, so I guess it was a good idea to go back and mess with it.

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